| Why am I crying? Great story, update soon.
Catherine- Wed 12 Mar 2008
That was a lovely story. I actually cried at the end. I'm a huge slacker and almost never review lol, but I figure if the story made me cry than I had to:)
Great job - that was beautiful and very original.
jo- Wed 12 Mar 2008
| about halfway thru when Jaken is talking, you didn't close the italicies (i did not spell that right, i have no i dea how) thing right, you forgot the tag at the beginning ( , but you had /i>
Tajia- Tue 11 Mar 2008
| You brought tears my eyes, such a sweet story! I hope you decide to continue!
LadySafire- Tue 11 Mar 2008
| Oh it's lovely! Please continue it! You now have a lonely Miko and a lonely TaiYoukai. Their tale needs continued.
| Lovely Story ... Sesshomarus OOCness Cant Be Helped Even The Greatest Of Men Fall To Their Knees When The Death Of Their Love Ones Comes To Light
inumaru_rapture- Tue 11 Mar 2008
| please add more? please?! PLEASE?!! lol i don't like to beg, but this makes me wanna beg for more. It seems like you can take it much further. This was really good either way. 33
| | | | | | | 