| : !? What kind of chapter is : !? Anyway, I think this fic has a very interesting concept. Just a little constructive criticism...try not to go to far overboard with the euphemisms because you might lose the reader a little bit. I think you have done a very good job so far. I hope you will continue this fic and I can't wait to see how it all plays out!
Megan Consoer- Wed 28 Mar 2007
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
inumaru_rapture- Wed 28 Mar 2007
| Wow. I'm excited to see where you take this. I like description and depth. Yay!
Kylwyn- Wed 28 Mar 2007
| I thought you had decided not to post this? Oh well lucky for me. Annoyingly brilliant as always.
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